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Revised mark from HM: Comment on the best bits: Some very clean shots and very good hand held work. The camera positions are excellent. An excellent edit.Things you can improve: Hand held work has to be better still, though! Marks are out of 3 for this:0 means you haven't done it.1 is lowest - it means that there is a lot that needs to be done, but that you have the material to sort it out and make it work.2 means that you've done the job competently and it is OK.3 means that you've done some parts of it really very well, and should work to exploit this.CAMERAMedium Shot MS 3Long Shot LS 3Close Up CU 3XLS - extreme long shot 2XCU - extreme close up 2Pan 3Tilt 3Zoom 3Cross focus 1Deep focus 2Tracking shot (dolly, hand held, shoulder shot) 3Point of View - POV 2Use of tripod 2EDITShot - reverse shot 2Establishing shot 3Cut 2Dissolve 2Total out of 54 = 41Grade B 76%