The Package

By Stuart Sharples and Harry Aquilina


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  2. Revised mark from HM:
    Comment on the best bits: Some very clean shots and very good hand held work. The camera positions are excellent. An excellent edit.

    Things you can improve: Hand held work has to be better still, though!

    Marks are out of 3 for this:
    0 means you haven't done it.
    1 is lowest - it means that there is a lot that needs to be done, but that you have the material to sort it out and make it work.
    2 means that you've done the job competently and it is OK.
    3 means that you've done some parts of it really very well, and should work to exploit this.

    Medium Shot MS 3
    Long Shot LS 3
    Close Up CU 3
    XLS - extreme long shot 2
    XCU - extreme close up 2
    Pan 3
    Tilt 3
    Zoom 3
    Cross focus 1
    Deep focus 2
    Tracking shot (dolly, hand held, shoulder shot) 3
    Point of View - POV 2
    Use of tripod 2

    Shot - reverse shot 2
    Establishing shot 3
    Cut 2
    Dissolve 2

    Total out of 54 = 41
    Grade B 76%